here is a story i wrote enjoy viewers * u are aloud to post this on your blogs * here u guys go.
Twas it was a stormy night and the sky was if paint were splatted on it and fire clan has gotten back from there hunt and deputy darkflare was angry that his clan had only got a few peices of meat the leader of the clan shadowflame said * its enough for right now *. Can i have some of the fresh kill said emberkit *one of the clan leaders kits * no ur to young said shadowflame hmmp replied emberkit Go train emberkit now! said shadowflame angryly. FINE said ember kit as he left off to train. I smell a rat said deputy darkflare it was storm we are going to capture emberkit and then slice his neck said storm shadowflame growled as he racked his claws down storms back giving him a scar for life. GO AWAY U OVERGROWN RAT said shadowflame nope said storm as he pounced on shadowflame, shadowflare easily kicks him off and growls again you want me to chase him off said darkflare* no i got this said shadowflame. shadowflame chases him repetedly bitting and clawing his tail. His gone hopfuly for good said shadowflame. that night he gose off training his 1 month old kit earliy you should not make him train this young said deputy* its when i was trained and it will be when he is trained clawing his kit * if ur sure said darkflare * his kit trains hard showing more prograss every day just like his father. END OF PART 1
PART 2 COMING SOON!
CAST : shadowflame ~dragontiger123 darkflare ~sabaka emberkit~ jamboa * dragontiger123's real animal jam kit realy called emberkit storm~starmstar12 * he is sabakas dad and snowypaw16 grandad so i put him in the story * credits : blah blah blah blah blah blah i like toast blah ba ooo me and moom. THE END * until part 2 of course!
yess
Twas it was a stormy night and the sky was if paint were splatted on it and fire clan has gotten back from there hunt and deputy darkflare was angry that his clan had only got a few peices of meat the leader of the clan shadowflame said * its enough for right now *. Can i have some of the fresh kill said emberkit *one of the clan leaders kits * no ur to young said shadowflame hmmp replied emberkit Go train emberkit now! said shadowflame angryly. FINE said ember kit as he left off to train. I smell a rat said deputy darkflare it was storm we are going to capture emberkit and then slice his neck said storm shadowflame growled as he racked his claws down storms back giving him a scar for life. GO AWAY U OVERGROWN RAT said shadowflame nope said storm as he pounced on shadowflame, shadowflare easily kicks him off and growls again you want me to chase him off said darkflare* no i got this said shadowflame. shadowflame chases him repetedly bitting and clawing his tail. His gone hopfuly for good said shadowflame. that night he gose off training his 1 month old kit earliy you should not make him train this young said deputy* its when i was trained and it will be when he is trained clawing his kit * if ur sure said darkflare * his kit trains hard showing more prograss every day just like his father. END OF PART 1
PART 2 COMING SOON!
CAST : shadowflame ~dragontiger123 darkflare ~sabaka emberkit~ jamboa * dragontiger123's real animal jam kit realy called emberkit storm~starmstar12 * he is sabakas dad and snowypaw16 grandad so i put him in the story * credits : blah blah blah blah blah blah i like toast blah ba ooo me and moom. THE END * until part 2 of course!
yess
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